The tsunami hits Japan last Saturday,
12th March 2012, in the afternoon. It is said that the tsunami was
caused by the tectonic movement of the earth. Many people are badly injured,
some still alive, but others has fly to the Heaven. This is all happened when
there was a small earthquake for about rickter scale 3. Everyone think that
it just a small earthquake, no need to be worried of. But instead, a humongous waves starting to be formed.
Now all the people deperately ran away from the sea. It only takes 40
minutes, for the humongous waves become a gigantic waves which is
approximately 12 km . “ I see this massive water coming towa- rd at us like i
never seen this before. “ said the survivor. The local police said “ When I
saw the tsunami, I can’t think straight anymore. All I can think of is running”.
In a couple of minutes, the water started to hit Japan and swept everthing
under 10 minutes. Everything in japan has been swept away by this
unimaginable tsunami. Another survivor said” this is the disaster that I
avoid of. I loss my children, my
husband, everything!
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the reader is in that position.
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